Your challenge for this Friday, 1-28-11, is to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 93-129 words. Since everyone seems to be enjoying the required phrases, please use this phrase in your submission:
Before the wardrobe door even opened I recognised the sounds of a crop whizzing through the air, landing on flesh; those muffled girlie yelps as she fought against screaming out aloud from pleasurable pain. I leaned closer, eager to watch her inner struggles, but stumbled in the darkness alerting them of my voyeurism. Instantly a man yanked the door open and demanded to know if I was having an affair with his submissive girl.
My shocked face was now as rosy red as his girl’s raised, stingy bottom.
“I’ve never seen her before, Sir,” I lied, hiding the inconceivable truth.
The Dominant man saw his chance and took it. For several hours I was held protectively in his arms as I weaved my explanation. One of kidnap and amnesia.
I became their pet; said goodbye to my old life.
Occasionally, I step into the wardrobe and travel back to Carnia, a magical land of carnal fulfilment. Upon my return I watch them sleeping, before rejoining their warm bed. The bed, which once belonged to me before I discovered Carnia where a week there, passes ten years here.
(190 words!) Not ideal, but hey… getting closer! *Laughs*
And yes, I am aware Carnia is a real place, but for the purpose of this blog post – you didn’t hear that from me. This Carnia is a lustful erotic place for the wicked…
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Nice story, I had drafted a take off on The Time Travelers Wife, but abandoned it when I realized the girl had panties on. And then a Star Trek transporter, I like your “time travel” slice. thanks
Thank you for your comment, David, lovely to hear from you. I will pop by to see what you have in store for us all on Friday, if not before 😉
Interesting and great read…Loved it
Thank you, Savannah! *Blush* Hope you are well, and writing lots! 😉
Excellent story, Angelika. Very imaginative and sexy. Well done. 🙂
Hey, Michael! Thank you very much indeed. 😀 I try… as you know, I’m very trying.